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Monday 20 April 2015

The Couch Potato

This poem is for every couch potato in the world, who chooses dormancy and  the insubstantial over the extraordinary gift of a spirited life. 

He plops himself on the sofa,
like a dysfunctional car in the garage;
with his bowl of chips,
the size of a crater on the moon.

He sits there from dawn to dusk,
like a building that has been there forever,
like an immovable boulder,
like old, unused furniture lying in the attic.

He is a rusting piece of machinery,
a stubborn lid on a jar,
lovers’ names scribbled on a monument,
a dusty corner in the house,
a goal-post in a soccer field,
 a foot path on a busy road,
an old, unswept, crumbly wagon,
 stationed on a railway yard,
 a piece of barren land.

He remains unaffected by the bustle around,
like a holy saint in meditation;
but people around him squirm and squiggle,
fidgeting like souls unable to rest in peace,
vexed at his indifference and aloofness,
that are as exasperating as an ink blotch
on a crispy, new, white shirt.

3 comments:

  1. Nice extended metaphor piece. Well described!

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  2. It is an interesting way to relate many things metaphorically! Though I can find many uses of a dysfunctional car in the garage; your last line is a cracker.

    Imaginative, connected and thought provoking!

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